Arina, Nice strong reading voice! You included a variety of evidence including mini-stories and direct quotes. For each, you made sure to explain why you included them. You also used a teaching tone with transitions when you explained what the evidence meant. You also included an overall lesson as well as what you learned personally! You wrote and shared an essay with a lot of thought and effort! Mrs. J
Maybe you read a different version of the short story than me but some of the things you said happened in the book I did not read when I read Last kiss. But other than that you did really good!
Arina,
ReplyDeleteNice strong reading voice! You included a variety of evidence including mini-stories and direct quotes. For each, you made sure to explain why you included them. You also used a teaching tone with transitions when you explained what the evidence meant. You also included an overall lesson as well as what you learned personally! You wrote and shared an essay with a lot of thought and effort!
Mrs. J
I like how I can hear you very clearly
ReplyDeleteI did last kiss too!
ReplyDeleteI like how your voice was loud and clear! Your examples fit perfectly! Great job, Arina!
ReplyDeleteMaybe you read a different version of the short story than me but some of the things you said happened in the book I did not read when I read Last kiss. But other than that you did really good!
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